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After the Fire

Posted on 2008.03.21 at 16:33

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faithintheboys
faithintheboys at 2008-03-24 02:55 (UTC) (Link)
I loved this. Ellen's voice is strong and sure and I love her opinion on everything. I love Hell's Sorority or whatever Jo was a part of. This was so interesting and detailed. I love how everyone came together and was united because of the boys. This was such a great piece. You did so well of explaining everything, it was as if this story was more than one chapter. Awesome job!

I have a story that I am stuck with. Would you mind looking at it either when I get a little more done or when I am finished? Thanks!
Corvus Imbrifer
corvus_imbrifer at 2008-03-24 17:52 (UTC) (Link)
The Sorority Girls from Hell are Charlie and Jill Shoemaker (Bloody Mary), Lori Sorenson (Hookman), Kat and Gavin (Asylum), Emily Jorgeson (Scarecrow) nominally led by Rebecca Warren (Skin), including Gert and Sarah, working in conjunction with Cassie Robinson (Route 666). (The 'Hell House' ghost hunters work for her.) There is a scene out there somewhere wherein Dean mocks Gavin for being 'one of the girls' instead of running with the combat teams of the Collins family or Deacon's convicts. Till he actually sees the girls motel room, with Gavin's little cot off to the side of the big beds covered in undergarments, and Gavin just grins...

If you have something for review, send by all means send when you're ready!

Thanks!
faithintheboys
faithintheboys at 2008-03-24 22:26 (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! I may finish soon, so I will send it when I'm done. Are you planning on writing more in this verse?
qzxy
qzxy at 2008-03-26 09:24 (UTC) (Link)
Gert and Sarah, working in conjunction with Cassie Robinson (Route 666). (The 'Hell House' ghost hunters work for her.) There is a scene out there somewhere wherein Dean mocks Gavin for being 'one of the girls' instead of running with the combat teams of the Collins family or Deacon's convicts. Till he actually sees the girls motel room, with Gavin's little cot off to the side of the big beds covered in undergarments, and Gavin just grins...

HEEEEE!
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