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Strangers in Gilead

Posted on 2007.09.28 at 18:54

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Corvus Imbrifer
corvus_imbrifer at 2007-10-01 01:59 (UTC) (Link)
Would you have liked more 19th Century descriptiveness? I can add more! (My editors were ruthless. Without ruth. I am verbose.)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and particularly interested at your take on the structure: one of the issues we dealt with was the jump from the action story to the intimate (so to speak), which was not particularly well transitioned. And there were two epilogues, really.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, also!
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