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The Ghost of Christmas Not to Be

Posted on 2006.12.02 at 11:44

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Pheebs1
pheebs1 at 2006-12-03 12:22 (UTC) (Link)
Thanks so much for linking to this story. I loved it. Amazing writing, you really brought the scene to life with such detail, and the boys really felt like them. Heartbreaking ending, with Dean's dream - which I could really see - and yet funny too, with the waitress commenting on them yelling at each other.

Interesting mystery and way to solve it too.

It is lines like this that I liked best:

A shadow passed over Sam’s face. Dean spun his fork. Keith watched Sam’s smile and thought of a cloud passing over the sun. Sam met his appraising look without flinching.
You say so much which just a few details.

Sam had a way with ladies of a certain age. ....Dean had a way with all ladies.

So them. Really loved it, excellent writing.



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