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The Ghost of Christmas Not to Be

Posted on 2006.12.02 at 11:44

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jennk528
jennk528 at 2007-10-22 18:42 (UTC) (Link)
I started this ages ago, lost it, found it again, and finally saved it so I wouldn't go through all that angst one more time...And yes, now I have finally read it.

Lovely story, and you write the boys' voices so well.

That instant of Sam's derision about Dean's homemade EMF meter - priceless.

Dean's dream, and all the details - yikes. Too scary! And I can so see that happening, the way Sam would take care of him, and the way Sam's life would just sort of fall apart.

Oh, *boys*

Perfect ending. LOL! The boys laughing their asses off in a pancake house....

Now I should go read your newest one, but I'm not sure how much I can sneak by while here at work....

btw, I am not a registered member at TWoP, but I have always enjoyed your erudite and insightful comments on the show. Hee!
Corvus Imbrifer
corvus_imbrifer at 2007-10-22 19:09 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you so much for saying so! The voices are key, one can only hope they ring true. (Mostly it's just making room in the reader's imagination and letting the actors take over. Not too difficult.)

The newest one is much longer, and different, I do hope you like it as much. (There is a short entry that looks like Google Mail, 'Dear Uncle Michael'. Maybe that would be easier to read at work. But no getting in trouble at work on my account!)

Now why aren't you registered at TWoP? We want to hear your thoughts, too!

Thanks again,

Corvus/karasu
jennk528
jennk528 at 2007-10-23 13:10 (UTC) (Link)
Because I have such a bad memory, and I can't remember all the good parts even when I've just finished a story, I forgot to mention the wonderful scene where Sam fumblingly (is that a word?) apologizes for the EMF meter remark. Love the instant he realizes what he'd said (Thanks to George), and how Dean reacted.

Anyway, I'm glad I finally went back and found your story and read it all way through this time!

And I did start Strangers - because I couldn't help it - but decided that yes, sitting in the back room through 107 pages might look a little suspicious....I look forward to reading it in its entirety while at home. Love it so far, though - the ladies on the balcony admiring Dean. LOL! How could they not?

And as far as TWoP...gee, kinda shy here. *g* Not sure I'm tough enough to play in the big leagues! I believe I shall continue to lurk for a while yet.
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